Pitch:
https://youtu.be/a6pkQdIp-G4
Reflection:
I did not receive any feedback on my last pitch. However, I am decided to tailor my pitch differently. My first pitch was a little longer and touch around the basis of my app. This pitch I decided to tailor it more to the customer, putting them in my shoes. Therefore, I made the pitch more thought provoking and straight to the point. I gave ideas that would draw emotions and interest. Also, I was description in describing my app as a solution.
Hey Jhoan,
ReplyDeleteThe first thing I wanted to mention is that your YouTube video is listed as private so I wasn’t able to view it. Based on your first pitch, I too thought that it was a little dragged out, especially since it felt repetitive with how much you said “my app”, so it’s good you touched on improving that aspect.